a poem or two

[ramble on rose]

Iam posting this through the encouragement of sauce.baby. It's an older poem of mine and a bit long.Alot of my writing is a bit more dark I guess you could say, but this one islovey. awwwww. I thought I would start you off with this one and work my way up to more intense ones. Enjoy.!?


When you
Cry on me my love
When you feel the need
To let it all out.
Try for me my love
When you are not with me
Tobe good.
Yell at me my love
When you needto
Let your anger out.
Trust in me my love
When you need someone&nbsp ; ;
To tell your secrets to.
Come to me my love
When you have noone
Else you can turn to.
Rest on me my love
When you are to tired
To remain awake.
Kiss me my love
When you want to show
A little affection
Touch me my love
When you want to
Stir up my passion.
Come into me my love
When you need to satisfy&nbsp ; ;
Our loving desires.
Commit to me my love
When you are ready
To begin a life with me.
Bless me my love
When you are near me
With your love always.Edited by: ramble on rose

[ramble on rose]

ok so I read this one and wanted to add another. This one is a bit more deep, I think. It is aboutlowself esteem. Don't worry it is short, and yet maybea bit disturbing.


If_You Love Me


I am A bitch


Hate Me


I am a liar


Ignore me


I am a wimp


Abuse me


I am a tramp


Screw me


I am a tease


Rape me


I am a thief


Arrest me


I am a pshyco


Commit me


I am a wreck


Finish me


If you love me


Kill me.

[sauce.baby]

those are awesome rose, thank you for sharing them! much of my stuff [when i used to write] was on the disturbing side.. i scared many an englishteacher in my HS days lol


ah, it's so frustrating.. i have the desire to write still, i just can't seem to find the words or the flow anymore.. i end up writing poems like a first grader again lol

[ramble on rose]

I am glad you enjoyed those. I can relate, when I was in high school I submitted a poem in english class for extra credit and it disturbed my teacher too. So much so that she sent me to the school pshyciatrist. It was funny to me. I get those moments all the time, not being able to find the words. I hate most of my writing, but the artist is his or her own worst critic. I go back and think, man that sux, and be the only one who thinks so. So thanks for the support sauce.baby, I will keep posting, if you keep enjoying. And like you said if everyone gets sick of it say the word. On the other hand though if you and I enjoy this sharing with eachother, LET IT CONTINUE!!! Much love.

[sauce.baby]

i got sent to a school psych too! hahaha they thought i was going to commit suicide or something.. i was like, dude, my life sucks and all 'cause my mom hates my dad and that's who i'm livin with, but i ain't gonna end myself over it! lmao let me get itonto the paper and out of my system and stop bitchin about it! would you rather me hold it in and then go apeshit one day? ya.. i think NOT.


maybe that's why i can't write much anymore.. most of my greatest stuff came when i was the most depressed.. it's harder to write deep stuff when you're pretty happy with your life.. some of my pictures are kind of depressing looking.. but i think it's 'cause i'm taking the deep words that someone else has already written and i'mputing my visual interpritation to it.. know what i mean?


infact.. i actually feel a li'l something from your poems.. if you don't mind? might take me a while to work them out.. but if you don't want me to post them anywhere, just let me know!





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[kelli420]

they were very good...i really like the 2nd one

[ramble on rose]

thanks kelli420 I think the second one is more my fav too, I dont really write alot of "happy" ones. I hear what you mean sauce.baby there are more and more periods in my life that i cannot write because things are going to well. which is funny to say. I say go for it I would love to see your visual interpritation of those and if they work out we can collaborate more.

[sauce.baby]

i took these practically the day i asked, but wanted to wait until i got the ok from you to post them here lol there's 3, and even tho only the last one is quoted from your first poem [i hope that is ok!], they are all from the same inspired session smileys/smiley1.gif


"been thinking about you.. and there's no rest" (http://karsh-i.usefilm.com/2/3/5/0/2350/601778-large.jpg)


"if you would only listen you might just realize what you're missing.." (http://karsh-i.usefilm.com/2/3/5/1/2351/601936-large.jpg)


"bless me my love.. when you are near me ..with your love always" (http://karsh-i.usefilm.com/2/3/5/7/2357/603421-large.jpg)





i have some ideas for the second poem.. but they are more on the morbid side and there are some technicalities i need to work out first lol


i can't wait to read more of your poems tho!

[kelli420]

that was pretty cool too

[ramble on rose]

i love it baby! I will get some more words for you soon. I cannot wait to see the ones you have in mind for the other poem. one love.

[ResqTek]

Words of wisdom from Rose. I liked em...great stuff. I liked the second. Very short and meaningful!

[greengirlie]

those are awesome rose, thank you for sharing them! much of my stuff [when i used to write] was on the disturbing side.. i scared many an englishteacher in my HS days lol


ah, it's so frustrating.. i have the desire to write still, i just can't seem to find the words or the flow anymore.. i end up writing poems like a first grader again lol





Wow. I know what you are totally saying girl. When I was in High School I was so damn creative with poems... but now Im just like blah. I dont have much of a desire anymore... probably since college fucking makes me write so much shit....!!!

[greengirlie]

I liked them both-but eyah the 2nd one was awesome. I find now that instead of writing poems, i write unsent letters to people. those really help.

[ramble on rose]

thanks all! I am glad you enjoyed them. got another one for ya-


Empty Soul


little sounds


lonely spirits


lifeless motions


of a love gone stale


speechless


breathless


mindless


Uncomfortable feeling


hatred


overpowering love


love for one


one of secrecy


betrayal


betrayal of a heart


denial


to the loss of love


love that was life


crushed to nothing


meaningless nothing


speechless


breathless


mindless


to all who approach


emptiness


nothing inside


hollow


no feelings left


left to absorb


in the brain or heart


broken in two


speechless


breathless


mindless


to all who step inside.

[sauce.baby]

augh! how frustrating! i know exactly what i want to do for this last poem [actuall thought of it for the previous poem, but it fits this one so much better] but i don't have the resources at hand! smileys/smiley19.gif i have to go buy what i need, and even then i'm not sure if i'll have enough.. [or if i'll even be able to find what i need..]


*sigh* i haven't forgotten about you rose lol i'm just in a tight spot right now

[ramble on rose]

right on sweetie. Do what you gots to do. One love.

[ragmop]

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[ramble on rose]

thank you ragmop, for the positive vibes my friend.

[LipstickVogue]

great stuff, both of you girls. thanks so much for sharing with us.

[ramble on rose]

thanks darling! looking forward to your art. one love.

[sauce.baby]

augh! i still haven't found what i need for these pictures.. if anyone knows where i can get my hands on a palm-sized, heart shaped mirror, me love you long time!!!

[ramble on rose]

have you tried a craft store, or maybe ebay??

[sauce.baby]

i've got a car tomorrow so i'll probably try michael's while i'm out.. i hate ebay with a passion tho. not sure why.. i just do lol

[ramble on rose]

i hate it too, and i know why, my husband bids on EVERYTHING!!!

[sauce.baby]

hahaha yeah that would suck.a couple friends of mine were arguing about ebay a while ago.. one kept refering to "one man's trash is another man's treasure" so finally my other friend came back with, "bullshit! one man's trash is still fucking trash!" ya kinda had to have been there.. but it was funny as shit.

[Alize]

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I wonder what its like to have a husband.


One of my friends just secretly got married on her birthday to her rock n roll boyfriend. She's so cute! I can't imagine having that feeling of protection around lonely tear drops and tortured heart.


Dontcha have any poems about that painted Rose?


Someone told me yesterday that true love is fantasy. I don't know what that means so I said what's your fantasy, friend.

[ramble on rose]

I don't have any words regarding marriage, but I think Brad said it best:


Because marriage doesn't work in the world today
It's an institution that is in decay.
And if I have love I wish to portray,
I will surely find another way.

Because I was always taught boy meets girl,
fall in love get married and forget the world.
Nine months later the sweet babys on the way,
Kiss 'em on the check and lifes ok.
I don't feel no pain, I don't have no time
to listen to conflicting points of view
I step into the great unknown,
with a ball and chain I call my own

[Alize]

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Brad never got married did he?


I never got married neither but some people try to make a diamond out of me.


thats a why I'm curious a ha like a lil lover. I bet its like that song G made-Two Birds. I think that song is my fantasy! Don't you think its beautiful. Iwant to feel that way. Ooohhh


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[ramble on rose]

yes i am married, and Brad did marry his lady after thier son was born. I just think all you need is a strong love and sense of commitment, marriage is just a piece of paper you know what i mean. You don't need that to prove your intentions to another person. My husband hates it when i talk like that, but that is just my opinion. I wouldn't let anyone sway your feelings about it. More poems coming your way darlin.

[ramble on rose]

how about a dirty one.....


Pretend


Alone


Without you


But you


Are in my mind


And Also


In my dreams


While lying awake


Wanting you here


Touching me


In those places


That make me hot


That turn me on


But you are not


So,


I lust for you


In my mind


And pretend


My hands


Are yours.Edited by: ramble on rose

[sauce.baby]

dirty is the best kind smileys/smiley17.gif


i love that one! all tooo familiar.

[ramble on rose]

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[Alize]

I'm good at pretending too.smileys/smiley17.gif


But I know what you mean Rosie. I don't care much for society's standards either. Alls I care about is the way I feel in my heart. When people try to make me conform I get a lil outa control. It seems to melike people get love and controlconfused a lot of the time and I hate that shit.
But I could be a real good girl for a real loving brother. And we won't be stopped, baby.smileys/smiley2.gif
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[ramble on rose]

Right on Alize, you just gotta live how you wanna live. One day a moment will happen when you are not expecting it and that loving brother will be at your door. I can't stand when people try to force me to conform, I wanna do what makes me feel good. Glad you liked that last one more to come!

[Alize]

Here's one for you, Rosebud


Cloud Nine


Homeboy told me to take it one day at a time


cuz sooner or later I'm bound to get mine


so hold tight if you like it like it


let me see you walk with it and make a man


give me a passion mark and take me by the hand


I hope you're still waiting for me, hollering for me,


you and all your dogs, I'm gonna make ya'll proud of me


cuz duty calls


I want to touch you in a deep spot I know just what to do


I'll work that grip, shake a leg and do tricks for you baby


if you come back into my arms


Too strange to remember when those eyes lit up


I see them everywhere that's why I won't give in or give up


say boy, hit up the B side and give it a spin


work that grip for me partner and shake a leg again


on cloud nine


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[ramble on rose]

i like that, very nice. thank you for sharing one with me.smileys/smiley17.gif

[ramble on rose]

http://images.ofoto.com/photos1124/2/95/10/54/96/0/96541095207_0_ALB.jpgEdited by: ramble on rose

[ramble on rose]

just wanted to share some photos with you guys taken my Mr. R. enjoy!http://images.ofoto.com/photos1124/2/95/0/77/56/0/56770095207_0_ALB.jpg

[ramble on rose]

this one I thought was cool, my wind chimes got caked in ice...


http://images.ofoto.com/photos1124/2/95/10/78/66/0/66781095207_0_ALB.jpg

[ramble on rose]

*G.L.A.S.S. please come back to Virginia*


http://images.ofoto.com/photos1124/2/95/0/77/16/0/16770095207_0_ALB.jpgEdited by: ramble on rose

[sauce.baby]

hmm.. the links aren't working.. i can get them to open in a new tab if
i copy the image location, i wonder why they aren't opening here tho.. smileys/smiley6.gif





super cute shots tho! and the one of the iced over chimes is awesome

[Mr.Ramble]

ok....now, she shares them wit/ yall....but not wit her own hubby..?? Just kidding Mrs.Ramble..One Love to You.