A Great Suprise

[Alize]

It's a great suprise, baby
to fantasize me
now open up your eyes, baby
please don't despise me
Come inside me, baby
I'll try some techniques
to make you love me
in between the sheets
then I'll take you down and out
into the streets
where we can walk around
and step to the beat
It's a great suprise, baby
to be inside me
Now come a little closer, baby
please don't deny me
the TREASURE of your words
they satisfy me
No, I just can't get enough
So, don't you ever stop
climbing up the stairs
that lead straight to my heart
You're a Great Suprise to me, baby!!

[ragmop]

Nice, very nice . . .

[kelli420]

cool

[ramble on rose]

nice one, I like it alot.

[Alize]

Your turn ROR....

[ramble on rose]

got one for ya, a shroom induced rhyme:


Footprints


The footprint covered sand


Reveals the life that passed


Over the earth that day


To the east


Nurishment of the ocean


During the course the evening runs


The water will wash away


The marks of the day


It cleans the earth


For the start of the new morn


The possibilities of what will be


Is unknown


Anything


And each day is the same


Endless opportunity


Golden roads that never end


Only lead to tother paths


All you need is momentum


And some gas money


To lead to the next beach


When you stroll on the sand


Toward the ocean, Remember


Only go in as far as you can swim


If it gets to wild


Go in to your knees


Get a little wet


And get on the sand


It will be repaved.

[Alize]

Aww, you're so sweet.Edited by: Alize

[Alize]

Another Poem: Light as A feather

you
i do not
advise you
to listen to
the things that I said
or wrote or sang
when I was young,
naive and angry
my hope for you is
to find your own piece
peace on your own terms
in your own world
I don't need an army
I don't want to revolve
around a competition
or a game
you can have
the past
I'm in love
with the future
and right here right now
all I want and need
is to be as light
as the feather
my puppy carries
me
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Puppy carrying a pheasant feather: unknown

[Monica*]

i really do wish that i was blessed with word like you guys are. g. too.

[ramble on rose]

you are too kind monica. nice one Alize.

[Alize]

she's got the flavor
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